P4

A) Review of rough cut

After finishing my rough cut i noticed that a lot of the cuts seemed too fast and un-natural. I Also think that I needed to crop and cut certain shots from the finished animation as they either do not show anything relevant to the scene. Some parts also were not as smoothly cut together which will be fixed in the final edit.

Jamie Went Review

On the city scene the red ball is not obvious that it is the ball, Also add sound effect to Durk as he watches the ball explode. Turn down sound effects on office scene.

Sam Stevens Review

More sound effects and design in desert scene. Specifically when the red ball spins. Unnecessary zoom in city scene.

B) C)


D)  https://vimeo.com/323101157
      https://vimeo.com/323101032
      https://vimeo.com/323101032

E) https://vimeo.com/325172141


Comments